Imagist Collage

Here is an attempt at another imagist collage. I have another one that is basically finished, but I want to edit it a little more before posting it. It is much better in my opinion, so if you hate this one, please read the next one.

Burning Metropolis

People rush through webbed road,
Clocks are striking rapidly in the West,
A dog makes a meal of rock,
An observer looks down,
slitting deep gouges.

Warm blood flows down the road,
Children slide,
pigeons fly from their hands.

A bridge draws up,
The river left dry,
replaced with crimson surge.

A crow flies down,
seeking solace in drink.
It finds no sustenance,
and seeks new habitat.

Acid burns through concrete holdings,
Crippling the city.
the crowds stumble,
left writhing in futility.